The 'Critique'

"Honey,What makes you think that you can write?Have you seen your language?Do you know the word 'Expression'?I wonder how can you even dare to ask someone to read your crappy writings and on the top of it you expect some feedback".This was the exaggerated derivation of her response to my simple question,"How did you find that write up?"She goes,"I did not like it AT ALL".
Silence...silence....silence...Mmmmm..."What did you not like about it?"Silence...silence...silence...I repeated the question...."I am not telling you that". End of conversation.

I just tried to analyse her voice,there was no feeling of guilt or fear in her voice.Guilt of how good or bad I 'll feel after hearing this and fear of straining our relationship.Her voice was as straight as it could be.

I think about that quote I read some centuries back'Nindak Niyaare Raakhiye'(Keep a critique in your company).Its better to be hurt by a biitter truth than to live by a sweet lie.It is such a great thing to have people around you who can dare to say anything in your face.It makes you feel so comfortable.Thank you for being so honest,I respect you so much for this.
She herself being an amazing writer,evrything she writes is so heartfelt and clear that sometimes I get speechless.I 'll really try to match your expectations and someday hear from you 'That was good'.
DIALOGUE OF THE POST:No filmy dialogue this time....'I did not like it AT ALL'-Anonymous.